It all began when I was five. I use to always think I was just like any other ordinary 5 year old kid but i never had opportunity’s they had. This was because I was born without arms. But it didn’t mean I was born without a heart. But others disagree. They take advantage of me. Does this mean I’m not welcome to society because im disabled? I don’t know… I think the world would be a better place without me.

The text above is the story line of my novel. This story will be about a young 15 year old female which was born with a disability. The story is set in a school environment where the young female is constantly being bullied. It will be in first person as if its a auto-biography. The story will contain 10 years of her life in stages leading to the present which will bring a sudden twist to the story. Until then, you’ll find out.

 

Mr North’s Comments:
Haxhi,
You have chosen some complex subject matter to write about – this does not mean that you should not write this, but it does mean that you must approach the piece with sensitivity and care.  I’m sure you are capable of doing this.

Consider:
1) Why have you chosen this character to write about?

2) Are there other events that you can write about from a place of personal identification.  All good writing contains elements of truths.